Football Game
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Character
1 leaves house to go play football (shot of him yelling he is going out to
play)
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Character
2 gets picked up outside his house by another player (shot from inside the
car while they pull up)
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1 Pulls
up to field and gets out of car
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2 Drives
up in car (camera in car) showing the field and his enemy
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1 He
goes and talks to 2 getting out of
the car about how he is going to beat him today
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2 says
he has been training and won’t lose this time
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1 talks
about how he was born with natural talent and cant lose
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2
leave me alone so I can meditate before the game
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Flash
forward to the game
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All the players gather up to choose teams
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8 players total and character 1 and 2 get picked last for both teams
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Argument on who to pick, 1 has 2 good older brothers its in the blood, 2 just started playing.
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1
gets picked first
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2
isn’t even pick they just tell him to “get over here”
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2 is
on the team with the kick return, he looks like he is ready like he is really
good but then you find out how bad they are
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2 he
misses the ball as it bounces off of him and they almost lose the ball to the
other team.
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1 is
the last person to get to the ball he makes fun of 2 “nice hands, feet”
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2’s
team does 2 plays and scores
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1
catches the ball in the kick return he runs 10 yards and trips on the grass
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2 now
he says a joke to 1 “have a nice
trip?”
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They guard each other every play and they don’t
do very good
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The
ball is finally thrown to 1 and he
gets pushed by 2 and gets hit with
the ball
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They start to fight and everybody just watches them
as they fight
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They start yelling at each other then someone
comes and tells them to get back to the game
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They say fine and go back to there teams
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They do a few more plays then it fasts forward
to the end of the game
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It’s the last play and 2’s team has the ball
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2
goes out for a pass and catches the ball, right when he catches it 1 smashes him.
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After he gets up he goes back to the teams all
happy saying that he wasn’t the worst
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Random
players get mad and says, “you both suck the same! You both didn’t gain us
any yards!”
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2 “I
just caught a giant catch!”
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player
“yeah on the last play of the game good job!”
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1 and
2 look at each other and then 2 asks if 1 wants to go to get something to eat
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They go eat somewhere and it looks like there
friends
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1
drops 2 off at his house and tells
him he will destroy him next time.
I like this idea. It's more than an outline, it's well developed! I would suggest starting the film with more emphasis on the rivalry between these two characters, rather than showing how he gets to the field.
ReplyDeleteMaybe they talk on the phone before the game. Or maybe you start on the field and have more trash talk. Driving to the game is not interesting and doesn't add to the story. That's my only criticism, this looks good.